2022年5月25日 星期三

111學年度學測翻譯+寫作解析

、中譯英

*      每年度學科能力測驗英文考科都包括兩條中譯英的題目各佔4要求英文正確通順與達意

1. 飼養寵物並非一項短暫的人生體驗而是一個對動物的終生承諾

Keeping a pet is not a short life experience but a lifelong commitment to animals.

✪ 補充

✍ Keeping a pet 可以寫成 Keeping pets

✍ short 可以寫成temporaryfleeting

✍ 要注意 not A but B的句式作文時可適當地使用這個句式

 

2. 在享受寵物所帶來的歡樂時我們不該忽略要善盡照顧他們的責任

While enjoying the pleasure brought by pets, we should not neglect the responsibility to take good care of them.

✪ 補充

✍ While 可以寫成 When

✍ pleasure 可以寫成 joyhappinessfun

✍ While enjoying the pleasure brought by pets 可以寫成 While we are enjoying  the pleasure brought by pets.

✍ the pleasure brought by pets 可以寫成 the pleasure (that) pets bring

 

二、英文作文

說明︰依提示寫一篇英文作文,文長至少250個單詞。

提示︰不同的公園,可能樣貌不同,特色也不同。請以此為主題,並依據下列兩張圖片的內容,寫一篇英文作文,文分兩段。第一段描述圖A和圖B中的公園各有何特色,第二段則說明你心目中理想公園的樣貌與特色,並解釋你的理由。

 

 

提示第一句説明作文的主題不同的公園,可能樣貌不同,特色也不同。作文第一段可以把這個意思寫出來,但不可以直接翻譯。接著就是依據提示描述圖A和圖B中的公園各有何特色要拿高分就要詳細描述是考驗字彙量的時候

 

作文第二段說明你心目中理想公園的樣貌與特色,並解釋你的理由重點是理想公園的樣貌與特色必須有理由

 

   Parks serve提供 the needs of different people, so they differ in appearances外表 and features特色.  Picture A depicts描繪 a park for children as it comes with a variety of play equipment遊樂設施In the foreground of the picture is a sophisticated複雜的 climbing frame框架 with several sliding poles桿子. Kids love climbing and the structure is what they need to develop physical skills such as balance平衡, hand and foot coordination協調, and agility敏捷.  In the background is a maze-like如迷宮般的 structure with at least three slides.  Not only is it fun for children to go through the structure, but it also requires需要 confidence to climb up and slide down swiftly迅速地.  Picture B, however, depicts a park for the general public, particularly people who prefer a quiet time in a lush蒼翠繁茂的 environment.  The park is dotted with佈滿 tall trees, with spacious lawns and hedges樹籬 forming a boundary邊界.  It must be popular with locals who are tired of the monotonous cityscape and enjoy being in the greenery綠色植物 of the park.  It is not a bad idea to do exercise in the park, be it running, jogging, roller-skating, or simply walking.  Families might also spend a weekend afternoon having a picnic on the lawns.

 

   The ideal park, in my view, should be a combination結合 of the features特色 of the parks depicted in Pictures A and B, and more.  Given the importance of the park as a public space in a community, the park should seek to meet the needs of all – kids, teenagers, adults, and the elderly.  Apart from除此之外 the play equipment for children, there should be sports facilities such as football fields, basketball courts, and a swimming pool, catering for顧及 the needs of teenagers and adults.  They are best housed in an indoor sports stadium so that activities will not be affected by poor weather.  For the elderly, a large area of the park should be devoted to greenery.  Trees, plants and flowers should be in abundance豐富 for them to enjoy as they amble從容漫步 at their leisure.  With this appearance and the features, the park will be hugely popular with residents and visitors.

 

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